Suggestions please, thanks

[naxx99]

Help me improve my gigs
https://www.fiverr.com/naxx99/do-professional-video-and-audio-editing?funnel=2151868e-c6c0-4a37-9142-c9fd446c5581
https://www.fiverr.com/naxx99/designan-amazing-logo-in-one-day?funnel=2151868e-c6c0-4a37-9142-c9fd446c5581

[boppyeric]

I will SEO your gigs and optimize keywords and buyer likelihood of buying for $10.

[davidtiberiu]

Hello @naxx99. From my experience with over 7.2k reviews on the Graphics and Design Category, I would advise you to change that “one day” to “24 hours” and instead of capitalising AMAZING go with LOGO in capitals. Hope it helps!

Regards,
David.

[blaisefaint]

Dear Nakii:

I took a quick look at your profile:

Your profile image: I suggest a color photo of you, smiling.
Your log line: I suggest you expand this to let people know you do A/V.
Your profile text – note the edits:

Hi, I’m a professional video/photo/audio editor. I have experience with great programs such as Photoshop, Vegas, After Effects, Audition, etc. I’m here to help you realize your vision. -Nakii

All your gigs should have video and 3 images, and so on…

Learn from czarekpiast’s example and make a video of yourself talking to the camera. He has presented compelling anecdotal evidence that this approach garners IMMEDIATE RESULTS. Include additional samples in the video!

Good luck,
Blaise

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[naxx99]

Thanks David and Blaise.
I used your suggestions and changed some things.
I also did 30 second video which I am uploading right now.
I hope I will get more orders and exposure soon

Best regards.
Nakii

[davidtiberiu]

Thanks David and Blaise.
I used your suggestions and changed some things.
I also did 30 second video which I am uploading right now.
I hope I will get more orders and exposure soon

Best regards.
Nakii

@naxx99 I really don’t know what to say about a video, but you can always try it and if it didn’t work you can change it. People are more interested in a portfolio better than a video. I don’t think someone will actually look at a 30 seconds video rather than a quick picture with some of your work that you are showcasing. In some other fields, a video may be a better fit, but in the Graphic and Design section, I think a good looking portfolio is way valuable than a video. Again, you can try the video, and compare the results. Good luck with your sales!

Regards,
David.