What else can I do to get first message or order?

[robertmlinarevi]

Hello there, I’m Robert! I’ll start clear, it’s not the first time that I’m writing something like this on the forum, I just wanted to ask, after like a few topics I’ve improved my gigs quite a lot. (Huge thanks to people here like, there were really amazing suggestions.) What can I possibly do more or improve more to get that sweet first?

I have like 3 gigs but on these 2 (1st gig | 2nd gig) I am working the most.

Every feedback is appreciated, also feel free to message me about those if you are interested!