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What is your first line when you send offers

hi when someone ask for services , i want to know what first line you put in proposal?

–greetings
–price info
–quality info
–or anything that you have sent and buyer came to buy your gig?

First of all, I require that I was explicitly asked to send an offer. After that I just explain the service and make some notes regarding pricing etc and invite them to ask questions if they have any. Basically, I personalize it. For the first line? “Dear xyz,”

I agree with emmaki with the “Dear xyz” part, but do not write
"Hello dear."

I am aware that a good number of sellers CALL their potential buyers "dear,"
but not a lot of people like this.
Starting the message with “Dear fiverr123” is OK. :slight_smile:

good greeting will be the best

I normally address them by their username and tell them what I offer for the prices that they are working with, I also state to them that they can ask me questions for clarity. Best wishes.

great info than you so much

you right bro i wanted to know greetings are best or direct tell
what i can do is best

do you think , they are on fiverr for greetings? its ethically very good, i agree with u

thanks for sharing your experience , i will try to use some of best tips from you guys