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What would you add to this gig?


#1

Here is the link to the gig - https://www.fiverr.com/pastordre/produce-3-custom-dj-drops


#2

I’d say nothing. You have a really awesome gig(s).


#3

Hi gina_riley2 - Thank you


#4

Dear Andre:

Here is a checklist to help you improve your gigs.

  • Your log line:
    Voice Overs, DJ Drops, Radio Ad, and Podcast Intros

For the sake of consistency, I suggest you change “Ad” to “Ads”.

*Your profile image:

This is a fine image.

  • Your profile text:

Hi, my name is Andre, aka “Pastor Dre”.

Note the addition of two commas and the shift from “also known as” to “aka”, which may not be the best of use of grammar, but does make use of poetic license. I’m dropping rhymes like Chelsea Handler up in here! Respect!

I am here to serve you, so feel free to message me 24/7.

Note the addition of the comma.

  • Gig Title:

I will record 3 CUSTOM Hip Hop Dj Drops, Sweepers, or Bumpers

Note the addition of 2 commas.

  • Gig Description:

In general, I find this lacking in key details, such as the length of each audio file and the audio quality.

Please contact me before ordering, as I will not do projects that have vulgar, offensive, adult material, or that are against my convictions.

I suggest further word-smithing this previous sentence.

A suggested format for your gig descriptions:

WHO I AM

WHAT YOU GET

WHY YOU SHOULD BUY FROM ME

RECOMMENDED GIG EXTRAS / COMPLEMENTARY GIGS

  • Video: 30 to 60 seconds. Fiverr says videos can boost your sales. You should include lots of examples.

This is technically a video, but the single static image has room for improvement.

You seem to be photogenic, so a presentation of you speaking directly to the Buyer will help to cultivate the sense that they know, trust, and like you.

Gig Images: You should have 3. The “generic white dude DJ” image would work better in a Key and Peele skit than in the context of this gig. Please find better images.

Gig Extras:

Of course, you’ll add these over time based on Buyer feedback.

Gig Packages:

Ditto.

Good luck,
Blaise