Whats wrong in my gig plz reply

[gour9173]

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[shajidbiswas]

Plenty of mistakes in your gig. Check out and published again 🙂

[looseink]

I looked it over quickly.

A couple of things stood out to me.

I find the statement “endless love customer service” a bit creepy.

I also think your reference to 24/7 service is misleading.

How do you stay online 24-hours per day?

Don’t you sleep?

If you are using an auto refresher, that is a ToS violation.

I’d change those things I mentioned.

I’m sure other Forum users will offer additional suggestions but those are mine.

[gour9173]

I looked it over quickly.

A couple of things stood out to me.

I find the statement “endless love customer service” a bit creepy.

I also think your reference to 24/7 service is misleading.

How do you stay online 24-hours per day?

Don’t you sleep?

If you are using an auto refresher, that is a ToS violation.

I’d change those things I mentioned.

I’m sure other Forum users will offer additional suggestions but those are mine.

Thank you for contributing