Whats wrong with my gig

[neeru]

Can anyone tell me whats wrong with my gig ?

https://www.fiverr.com/share/XLR8WD

[pixel_craft]

Lack of images. add more

[zeus777]

You should ask someone to edit your description as well.
I strongly suggest you to remove the “dear” at the very beginning.

[neeru]

Lack of images. add more

thank you so much for reply… surely i will add more pics

[neeru]

You should ask someone to edit your description as well.

I strongly suggest you to remove the “dear” at the very beginning.

ohhhh thanks … ok i will remove that word… but can you please suggest me a good welcome line

,thanks in advance