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Why people go in to my faiverr page but not make an order?


mikimation

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The product looks great and I see you have a few orders in your pipeline.

I would suggest a couple of alterations. Firstly the title-
“I will animate facebook profile picture of you” sounds a bit clunky. I would say something more along the lines of “I will animate your Facebook profile picture” - also note the capitalization of Facebook.

Secondly your video uses the phrase “living it up a little” which isn’t great English.

There is a lot of potential in what you do and you are clearly very talented. Some small changes and a lot of marketing effort will really take you a long way.

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