Would love some feedback from the members, and if I can do the same for you just post a link at the end of your feedback.
https://www.fiverr.com/indybutts/review-your-self-help-book-and-give-feedback?
https://www.fiverr.com/indybutts/give-you-a-comprehensive-guide-to-creating-a-self-help-book?
Your gigs are really good and perfect 
Wow, thank you zaiba202 for taking the time to look.
Your gigs are like your feedback…all excellent. The third one could possibly do with a pass over by a proofreader.
There are a few very minor mistakes, but apart from that…all good
you create very good gig!!!
Thank you for taking the time inipon
Definitely remove this “I AM NEW TO FIVERR AND WANTED TO SHARE MY SKILLS TO HELP YOU” instead construct a variation of your gig headline and then highlight it. everything else looks good
phenomenal explanation your thinking is great