Would you please review my gig? Thank you

[rogojagad]

Hello, there. I am a newbie in fiverr. I’ve been on fiver for 2 weeks and put a gig on giving a comment on blog post. I am looking forward to the first order, can someone review my gig?

https://www.fiverr.com/rogojagad/comment-on-10-of-your-blog-post

I’ll appreciate any help or review you give me.

Thank you.

[homeestates]

The English is a little off and this will put people off.

Try "I will post 10 high quality comments…"
and “…make your blog look more alive…”

This is really important as the language you use here is a reflection of the language you will use in your comments.

If your English isn’t quote there then ask someone for help. There are gigs on Fiverr that help people brush up their English.

[rogojagad]

The English is a little off and this will put people off.

Try "I will post 10 high quality comments…"

and “…make your blog look more alive…”

This is really important as the language you use here is a reflection of the language you will use in your comments.

If your English isn’t quote there then ask someone for help. There are gigs on Fiverr that help people brush up their English.

thank you for your suggestion